new moon sky
filled with
starry delight
cracks in heaven's floor
stardust
falls upon the shore
of nighttime's
winter dreams
moving slowly
in between
midnight thoughts
& slumbering nods
darkness holds
a long reign
with trails of stardust
in its wake
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one single impression
About Me
- qualcosa di bello
- "qualcosa di bello"...Italian for something beautiful...God's creation is full of beauty & that is what I hope to share with all who visit on my blogging journey..."piacere"...it is a pleasure to have you visit!
19 comments:
there's a calmness in your words but also a subtle excitement in between thoughts, lovley
This is a magical depiction, I can almost hear tinkling bells among the stars!
A series of beautiful images! Definitely touched with stardust.
Some days I feel like a loyal subject to the reign of darkness.
This is truly beautiful! Great take on this marvelous prompt. Just loved reading this.
Your header is dazzling!!!!
Hugs, G
www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
Just breathtaking!
So magical, peaceful...I'm happy to have "discovered" your beautiful blog!
I'll take the midnight thoughts and the winter dreams. I need some of each. The slumbering nods are holding those two back.
I could never have come up with these although they are common notions.
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You interweave magic into the stars and everything.
I love tour imagery.
Excellent Poem.
I want to walk amongst the stars after reading this!
playing for pleasing the moon
And please do visit Poetry Train being run each Monday!
cracks in heaven's floor - lovely... your imagery in this poem is so wonderful!
stardust
falls upon the shore
of nighttime's
winter dreams
my favorite line. simply lovely!
I'm awed by the image of heaven's floor. I just never thought of it that way before. Isn't poetry wonderful?
Your poem starts with inky blackness and suddenly the light appears-- very nice.
..for the gentle fragrance of lyricism..many thanks & a very happy new year!..
I love the "cracks in heaven's floor stardust falls upon the shore" what a wonderful image. Wonderful poem.
These words were truly inspired. Calm and dreamy with a touch of spiritual breath. Really like this. A happy and peaceful new year to you and your family.
I can't believe I didn't see this other blog of yours until now! Very lovely...
lovely qualcosa!
This feels like a dream to me--one of those mystical, memorable ones...
thanks
and happiest of new years--
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