Sunday, December 28, 2008

stardust

new moon sky
filled with
starry delight
cracks in heaven's floor
stardust
falls upon the shore
of nighttime's
winter dreams
moving slowly
in between
midnight thoughts
& slumbering nods
darkness holds
a long reign
with trails of stardust
in its wake
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
one single impression

19 comments:

lissa said...

there's a calmness in your words but also a subtle excitement in between thoughts, lovley

Deborah Godin said...

This is a magical depiction, I can almost hear tinkling bells among the stars!

fourwindshaiga said...

A series of beautiful images! Definitely touched with stardust.

SandyCarlson said...

Some days I feel like a loyal subject to the reign of darkness.

Geraldine said...

This is truly beautiful! Great take on this marvelous prompt. Just loved reading this.

Your header is dazzling!!!!

Hugs, G

www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

angie said...

Just breathtaking!
So magical, peaceful...I'm happy to have "discovered" your beautiful blog!

Jim said...

I'll take the midnight thoughts and the winter dreams. I need some of each. The slumbering nods are holding those two back.
I could never have come up with these although they are common notions.
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anthonynorth said...

You interweave magic into the stars and everything.

Edward S Gault said...

I love tour imagery.
Excellent Poem.

gautami tripathy said...

I want to walk amongst the stars after reading this!

playing for pleasing the moon

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Tumblewords: said...

cracks in heaven's floor - lovely... your imagery in this poem is so wonderful!

floreta said...

stardust
falls upon the shore
of nighttime's
winter dreams

my favorite line. simply lovely!

Linda Jacobs said...

I'm awed by the image of heaven's floor. I just never thought of it that way before. Isn't poetry wonderful?

Pam said...

Your poem starts with inky blackness and suddenly the light appears-- very nice.

zoya gautam said...

..for the gentle fragrance of lyricism..many thanks & a very happy new year!..

mgirl said...

I love the "cracks in heaven's floor stardust falls upon the shore" what a wonderful image. Wonderful poem.

Quiet Paths said...

These words were truly inspired. Calm and dreamy with a touch of spiritual breath. Really like this. A happy and peaceful new year to you and your family.

Catvibe said...

I can't believe I didn't see this other blog of yours until now! Very lovely...

Beth P. said...

lovely qualcosa!

This feels like a dream to me--one of those mystical, memorable ones...

thanks
and happiest of new years--