dear qualcosa--This haiku could be also for last week's prompt, disguises.if this poem is about your current state, I surely hope you find a place where you can weep and mourn with great openness. Disenfranchised grief takes much longer to heal...sweetness on your journey--
I agree with Beth, a painfilled smile can be a disguise as well as a contradiction, a paradox. This is tender, yet direct.
I know that feeling very well....blank page soaked
A sad but often necessary determination.
Our culture voiced in three lines, very nice, I like it. I think we've all been there quite often...
Disguise, contradiction, inversion--and yet a teller of truth if we know how to look. Deb speaks for me--tender and direct. Thanks.
I connect really well to what u write. Wow ...
That sure works perfectly!!
This is so amazingly succinct. It explains the vulnerability, the strength, the pain, and the resolve...
Good advice, too!
Wow, only a few words but it packs a powerful punch. A paradox, indeed...
..exclusivey,in terms of poetry (impersonal,non-autobiographical)'smileeven though the heartweeps'_is a beautifully expressed paradox..many thanks..
Simple but true!!!
Good advice, but hard to do sometimes.
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