"a flutter of life's confetti" ... I love it. Very tight poem. The first and last lines really work well in tandem.
an intriguing poem, the use of the adjective "smug" gives a wry twist to the poem!
This was excellent. Beautiful,evocative and so well written.
That was wonderful! Thank You
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"a flutter of life's confetti" ... I love it. Very tight poem. The first and last lines really work well in tandem.
an intriguing poem, the use of the adjective "smug" gives a wry twist to the poem!
This was excellent. Beautiful,evocative and so well written.
That was wonderful! Thank You
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