Wednesday, March 5, 2008

shift

eventide
stilled to a whisper
first star
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mining memories
time travel at touch of your hand
one tear falls
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chapel veil
surrounding my eyes
thread of incense
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shadows fall
in spectrum of blue
cricket song

6 comments:

paisley said...

every one a treasure...but that second one is just for me...one i

UL said...

'mining memories'...I loved it!

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Calming and touching.

I love the header photo. The "grass" in the foreground, in WA when I saw it on the roadsides, I always reacted with a smile, not sure why, but I love the color.

noahthegreat said...

The last one was my favorite.

I love nightfall.

paisley said...

please don't think i am not keeping my promise to visit.. i am doing so every time you post tho... not just on thursdays... i really appreciate the effort you put into reading and commenting on my stuff... thank you....

Billy said...

"Time travel at the touch of your hand." What a mesmerizing image! Loved the whole poem.