Tuesday, February 12, 2008

love

between wake & sleep
soft kiss on forehead, blanket tuck
threshhold of sweet dream
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~walk a country path
amid the dying season
wrinkled hands entwined
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~no greater love
daily dying to selfish ways
for another
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~endless circle
metaphor of love's mettle
with this ring i wed
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

14 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely collage of images and words

Anonymous said...

I totally agree with crafty green poet - they are all delightful.

UL said...

oh this is beautiful...you said it so beautifully, thank you for stopping by.

Sean Boyd said...

Your words create great imagery! Real enjoyable.

Tumblewords: said...

Great assortment of love'ku and images...each one a treasure!

SandyCarlson said...

This is wonderful. I like the progression of time in your haiku. God bless.
Writing in Faith: Poems

Anonymous said...

they'll so lovely!

spacedlaw said...

I was particularly touched by the second one.

little wing writer said...

the aspects of love you have written so beautiful.. enjoyed each one...

Everydaythings said...

I liked them all but the second one I was particularly touched by.

Anonymous said...

Very different images and words connect as one.

Beauty.

paisley said...

the second one was my favorite,, but i loved them all... and the photos... perfection.

Andree said...

Wonderful combinations of photos and poems. The wrinkled hands and mettles are the images that mean a lot to me. Thank you. My One Deep Breath is here.

Pearl said...

Like the 3rd one. Powerful.