Friday, February 15, 2008

undercurrent

smile on the outside
hiding turbulent waters
of pain's erosion

5 comments:

UL said...

"pain's erosion", wow, says it so beautifully...very nice.

paisley said...

this was very well worded... it carried quite a wallup too......

Karina said...

OOOH, yes, I know that feeling! Beautifully expressed.

noahthegreat said...

Enthralling.

I don't think you should hide everything, but it is necessary to act as if everything is alright to get everything moving again.

Pain is a common subject in my life.

Nick Mathews said...

simplest path out for the feelings...simple and therefore most powerful. a painful smile on the outside i must say. beautiful.