in the water
i see ripples of hope
staring backsilent glide
across mirrored surface
two skiesone drop falls
onto still surface
ripples outwardspatter of sunlight
shimmering dance of surface
tickled reflectionmirror image
reflection in stillness
morning light
17 comments:
The idea of a tickled reflection stirs my imagination. I think of tickled as being pleased and happy as well as being teased. Your poem makes me realize it's possible to be both at once and to be delightfully at peace. Thanks.
Writing in Faith: Poems
These are all lovely, but I especially like the first one. And I love the last photo.
Very beautiful images; when I think of reflections my first thought is of water. Love the pink sky and reflection; also the words fit each photo so well.
Thanks for your comment on mine.
those last two photos are amazing... i love that mitrored image effect...
and the line, "tickled reflection".. that is a really great piece of imagery...
I enjoyed all of these, but my favorite would be the 'spatter of sunlight'. I love to sit on the porch up at the Lake in Maine and enjoy the light dancing on the lake in the early morning, before anyone else is awake.
I love your photos, especially the last three!
"Shimmering dance of surface", my favorite line. The photos are wonderful too.
Spatter of sunlight...I loved it! Great photos too!
reflected changes
mirrored surface two skies/spatter of sunlight shimmering.. tickled reflection/>..beautiful imagery..fine photography..thank u ..
wow, lovely words and great photos!
the last two are my favorite, your poetry always amazes me
I have to agree with Raven.
What a wonderful series of reflections.
You have painted beautiful reflections - pictures with words and with light.
beautiful... it's all abt the water and movement...
That last photo is marvelous, so still.
All lovely - the last especially. It looks as though it could be turned upsidedown and one would still have a picture that made perfect sense.
Reflections as these are mesmerizing. So beautiful. Thank you.
Wow, I love all of these. I wonder which came first, the pictures or the haikus??
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