Tuesday, January 1, 2008

frost

warning for tonight
paint the earth in icy tone
touch of winter sky
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
one deep breath

12 comments:

Sandy Carlson said...

What an interesting haiku. Warned that we should do something. This is really powerful. Thanks, and God bless.

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Abzdragon said...

Really interesting! I love the photo!! And happy new year!

lissa said...

great poem and the image is just right for it.


Have a great new year!

Roswila said...

Love the haiku written on the rock. Love rocks ... cool haiga!

Crafty Green Poet said...

did you leave the written rock there for someone to find? Nice idea to write haiku on stones

get zapped said...

How clever! Thank you and have a terrific new year!

Karina said...

I love this! You really are the master of haiku!

spacedlaw said...

Very nice haiku and idea. I was thinking of writing on rocks as well, for the writers' island poetry wave...

tumblewords said...

Wow! This rocks!

Sandy said...

I really enjoyed your haiku. I love the warning that there is icy weather on the way...very nice.

S

Krissie said...

never seen it done like that before...love the haiku it rocks!!!

Quiet Paths said...

So creative! Written in stone! Very nice.