Tuesday, June 17, 2008

haiku!

with only three lines
some tell whole stories
five, seven, five

7 comments:

paisley said...

and they always seem to stroke my creativity,, as i feel a certain sense of accomplishment in having crafted that five-seven-five.....

noahthegreat said...

This reminds me of billy collin's jabs at how formed poetry sucks. I love it, though, it really makes me appreciate free verse and using words wisely.

indicaspecies said...

True, but some, like me, only make an attempt, and are still very happy with the result.:)

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Oh so true

SandyCarlson said...

Your poem reminds me of how poetry in its form captures something of the rhythm of life. I am always intrigued by the way poets (and other writers to some extent) harmonize.

Ričardas said...

Indeed you do :)

WillThink4Wine said...

I love the economy and structure of haiku! And I love your haiku on haiku!